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Goodbye, Good Luck

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There was a time
When if you had asked me
If I love you
I would have said yes in a heartbeat,
but that time is long past gone.
I still love you,
Make no mistake about that.
And every time you smile at me,
The world still seems to brighten up
And I can't help but smile back
But now, instead of the lightheartedness
Of springtime love,
Or the ecstasy of a first crush,
The feeling's been replaced with a tender affection
that siblings and best friends so often feel for each other.
I don't feel pain anymore,
when you tell me about someone wonderful you met.
I'm finally free to laugh,
without dying inside.
I can finally smile
and it will be reflected in my eyes.
Nothing has really changed you know,
I will always care for you
And I will always wish you the best.
Have a good life,
My dearest friend.
Full Title: Goodbye, My Love… Good Luck, My Friend…

Style: Free-flowing, first-person perception

Theme: Acceptance and moving on
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CharlesAChaloupka's avatar
Good poem.
Maybe I should post my other like 14?
XD